Critique/Help With My Website Title

[njmac]

I'm sure this will be painfully clear but I am not a designer

I am working on a website using a theme: Cutline for wordpress. I tried to customize the title a little bit and I need some advice.

Should I just stick with the default font as a title, or should I use what I did, or just a different font?

THANK YOU!

 

[njmac]

Here is the other one:

I'm not set on green and black either

 

[LeviG]

bottom one is my prefered one, but the green and black shouts british pub to me, dont know why

 

[njmac]

haha, thanks!

How about Orange and Grey?

 

[Blue Velvet]

How about Orange and Grey?

Sounds good. Can you set the type so you don't have the large caps at the beginning of each word? And the drop-shadow adds nothing; it looks cleaner without it.

 

[njmac]

Sounds good. Can you set the type so you don't have the large caps at the beginning of each word? And the drop-shadow adds nothing; it looks cleaner without it.

Thanks
How about this? I think I could probably lose the stripes at the top.

 

[Aperture]

I'd keep the stripes. I think they look nice.

...From a totally non-designer point of view.

 

[njmac]

I'd keep the stripes. I think they look nice.

...From a totally non-designer point of view.

Thanks for the input. I've looked at these words about 100 different ways and I'm not sure what I like anymore

 

[LeviG]

I like the new orange and grey look, it should work well, the orange can be used as a highlight/accent colour throughout the website and the grey could be used as the text colour.

It looks a lot less like a pub now