I think the point here is that
you have asked for a critique of
your site which to would lead me (and many others) to believe that this site is
your work. But as we all know now, this isn't the case, it's a template, it's wordpress, it ain't that impressive, sorry. Perhaps a better question for the forum would have been 'Do you think this is a good template for my new site', or 'What do you think of the content on my new site'.
I'm pleased for you that you've started to have a play around with Wordpress, it's a great blogging tool and has huge potential for creating your own custom sites which I'm sure we'd all be very happy to comment on once you start down that road. For now though, you can't really be asking for a critique of something that you've really not created (i.e. designed) yourself.