Feedback on Banner for Speckproducts.com plz

[SchneiderMan]

Hey so i made this banner in a few minutes and would appreciate it if you gave me some feedback on it, its for Speckproducts.com.

Well my banner was chosen and i won what ever i want from speck sweet. i dont know what they picked yet but ive sent them newer version so..

 

[NoSmokingBandit]

Use a heavier font, its a bit hard to see on a large monitor. Be careful on the right where the gradient gets lighter, some of the text gets very hard to read over there, specifically the K in "Speck" and the end of "shell."

You could probably get rid of the logos at the bottom and expand your text into that area.

 

[SchneiderMan]

OK ive changed the background, would this be better? and then to change some text?

Edit, nvm thanks

 

[three]

I personally would change the font of the "see thru hard shell case" text. It right now is hard to read.

 

[sigmadog]

Congratulations on winning. Whatever you get, make sure it wasn't dropped like the images in your banner.

 

[decksnap]

Nice, but what does it look like when you compress it to under 30k?

 

[GoCubsGo]

The second one but the font is terrible (see thru ... etc). It is impossible to really read and when compressed it will look even worse.

Congrats on winning.

 

[MattSepeta]

Font

Font is wayyyyyy too hard to read....

The thing looks really nice, and it may serve well for the purpose (techie site I am assuming, so they will have generally faster connections), but to get the size low enough, it will look like crap compressed.

Love the background, but I doubt it will look great when compressed.

Company name is not displayed prominently enough, imo.

Congrats on the contest win though!!

 

[jdl8422]

I'm not a fan of the way the gradient flows. I'd try a more subtle radial gradient. I also am not a fan of the light text.

Congratulations of winning. Looks like speck got some cheap labor out of you.