Hello all, i recently got a contract to shoot a model in a fur store.I am not a professional photographer i am a friend of the client. Apart from the textbook full length shots i also took some candid portrait shots which in my opinion are always better than stiff/posed shots. Let me know what you think camera nikon d70.
If your posed shots are stiff, then you haven't relaxed the model enough. The hars shadows on the faces aren't that flattering IMO.
First shot: can't see fur, can't see model's face well, rack is distracting, door frame gets in the way too much, model isn't looking at the camera, model is too formal for the overall shot, needs better white balance or better background lights.
Second shot: needs fill light, needs better background, shadow on model's face isn't flattering, folds and wrinkles on jacket don't work- especially with the pose, pose would be better with model looking more in direction body is turned needs better white balance or better background lights.
Third shot: Would prefer model looking at camera, model needs to smile, would have side-lit the coat for some fur detail, probably with a silver reflector, needs better white balance.
Fourth shot: Best of the bunch, crop out the distracting shadow at the top, model would look *significantly* better with both a smile and a catchlight in her eyes. A little fill wouldn't hurt here either- product shots should generally be more "open/happy." Not necessarily flat lighting, but this'd be a great shot with a smile and a bit of fill from the right. Finally, white balance! The hair in the back is a little unmanaged, but it'd probably pass with a bit more light.
That's my two cents...