Hot Air Balloon Ride. Logo Design. [Bored]

[iMacBoy]

Hi,

Got bored so decided to design a logo for a random hot air balloon company (made up name etc...) Was looking for some critiques and i still think myself that the logo might look a bit 'much' if you know what i mean, and also the balloon might be a bit big and makes the logo a lot bigger filling it with blank space and small text. anyway here they are...

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[tobefirst ⚽️]

Clever. I'd play around with trying to get the balloon to be more a part of the logo. Perhaps using the balloon *and basket* in place of one of the letters (perhaps the I?).

Also, I don't think Helvetica is the correct font here. It is too generic and stuffy. Try something with a bit more personality.

Lastly, go back to working in simply black and white. Add color once you've nailed down the form.

 

[iMacBoy]

Cheers for the advice, yeah and to be honest i was stuck with an idea for the font, i wasn't sure what was too much for a hot air balloon logo, but i will play around with them, also i will try a few different styles with the balloon, basket and the letter and have a little mix with them.

Thanks!