Critique of logo please...all constructive criticisms welcome!!! not too hot on 'whip appeal' font, any suggestions??? thanks!
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The name of the service is a play on words...whip - slang for someone's car
As a start, corny and clichéd yes, but isn't motor car "detailing" all about gloss and such? Give it some shine! Give it some appeal.
The name of the service is a play on words...whip - slang for someone's car
I'm aware of what it is, but if you have to explain it, it's not a good choice.
starting from scratch
it makes me think of food, not car
the whip = whip cream
and the round object thing = pizza cutter
first thought when seeing this logo was bakery
Just curious as to why you would be commenting on a logo that no longer exists. Starting over from scratch means that he is throwing out what he had and doing something completely new. You're beating a dead horse.
I like the buffer. I would do something with the buffer.
What happened to the original logo?
True THX, he did get it pretty tough but with that said he wanted feedback... I think the actual design wasn't that bad it just really wasn't relevant to the market, so not a very well researched concept thus missing the mark.
I'd be interested to see the revision though, but I it scared him off![]()
If you are going to design and be brave enough to show it for comments, then you better be tough enough to take it. I don't think anyone was being disingenuous and pushing for a different solution was the right choice. If I did a crappy design, I would rather know it ahead of time than to look like an idiot later when I showed off the finished product to the world. Good design is painstaking and fussy... especially if you don't know what you are doing. I hope the OP comes back. I look forward to seeing if he solved the problem.
Don't get me wrong I do agree with your response, good design take time. I've redone many a "client leet design job" specifically because they thought they could get a logo cracked out in an afternoon. It takes time ad revision for a good quality logo.
The best quote I've heard was "good design is invisible, bad design just isn't" via a Creative Director friend, and he was right.