My first Apple Parody video

[Ofdan]

I normally programming computers using my iMac.
However I thought I'd be a bit more creative and try to do an Apple parody video for Tuesdays event.

What do you think?

 

[Donoban]

I normally programming computers using my iMac.
However I thought I'd be a bit more creative and try to do an Apple parody video for Tuesdays event.

What do you think?

Great effort putting this together. The obvious things for improvement are to look down the barrel of the camera, memorise your script (you wrote it so you can adlib as you go) don't read and some of your transitions broke the story you were telling.

I actually liked your joke about the next iPhone being called gorilla because it was actually tested by a gorilla.

Keep up the top effort.

 

[Ofdan]

Thanks Donoban.

Thinking about it now, I shouldn't have shoved the "Sorry" video in the middle.
I should have memorised the script, that is a fair shout.

It was rushed because I wanted to release it before the event.

When I wasn't facing the camera, I was trying to replicate the effect of Apple videos.
e.g.

However, I agree it wasn't as good as I'd like.

Thank you for your comments.

 

[Donoban]

Thanks Donoban.

Thinking about it now, I shouldn't have shoved the "Sorry" video in the middle.
I should have memorised the script, that is a fair shout.

It was rushed because I wanted to release it before the event.

When I wasn't facing the camera, I was trying to replicate the effect of Apple videos.
e.g.

However, I agree it wasn't as good as I'd like.

Thank you for your comments.

I think it was an awesome first effort. Don’t stop now.

Even run your script past some friends or family to see if it gets a laugh.

Did you see that video about the really long iPhone? It was a piss take of the iPhone 5 linger screen. That was quite good I thought.

 

[Hitrate]

Treat your room to get a deader more pro sound and ya look at the camera, and speed up the delivery..cheers.