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My New Logo
- Thread starter kammron
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And....you want us to discuss it....?
Personally I think 'designs' is a bit hard to read - but it's a pretty nice logo nonetheless.
Personally I think 'designs' is a bit hard to read - but it's a pretty nice logo nonetheless.
AvSRoCkCO1067 said:
Same thought here, it is kinda hard to read the "design". But besides that, your logo looks pretty cool kammron.
I agree...its not bad, but the "designs" is hard to read.
Also, be careful with .png's. Those windows folk using IE have trouble with alpha transparency.
Also, be careful with .png's. Those windows folk using IE have trouble with alpha transparency.
I agree..."designs" is hard to read. And I'd 86 the drop shadow, too.
In all, the logo doesn't really stand out to me. It looks like something that would become dated rather quickly.
"kam" loses it's outline when printed on a white sheet, which would leave "Ron" bigger.
Also, how does this design work in grayscale?
In all, the logo doesn't really stand out to me. It looks like something that would become dated rather quickly.
"kam" loses it's outline when printed on a white sheet, which would leave "Ron" bigger.
Also, how does this design work in grayscale?
Seeing this design, my eye is lead right to Ron, I don't even notice kam or designs unless I look at them specifically, but my eye is lead right to the word Ron on this background.
I will echo the "hard to read" sentiment, in addition to adding emphasis to the posts made by Josh and tobefirst, as I agree with their points, as well.
thats cause it was made in like 5 minutes,
and prior to it i didnt have a logo.
this is for individual work and mixtape covers.
and prior to it i didnt have a logo.
this is for individual work and mixtape covers.
do you design for NASCAR teams?
Considering 'design' is badly designed I'd redesign the design part of the design.
do I win a prize for including design so many times?
Considering 'design' is badly designed I'd redesign the design part of the design.
do I win a prize for including design so many times?
kammron said:
I once read a quote somewhere (anybody fill me in if you know it) of which the gist was:
Never excuse your work; always work to your best and sit back and be proud when the criticism comes.
You did ask for advice.
Anyway back to the critique; it's nice, but design is hard to read. Sorry
Personally... designs is a pinch hard to read, but I like the idea of it. Maybe write it out yourself in your own cool cursive and scan it in and do some magic to make it a smooth vector.
The RON does stand out to be the attention grabber though, kam seems to be just forgotten. It's a great start, try a different font for the KamRon. I think sticking to strictly black and red, or white and red (depending on what color it's resting on) would be nice.
Lastly.... I've discovered that this forum is such a nasty place for critique, everyone is a superstar professional is whatever you're asking about, whether it design, or photography, or english, and many are rather tactless in their delivery of 'critique'.
The RON does stand out to be the attention grabber though, kam seems to be just forgotten. It's a great start, try a different font for the KamRon. I think sticking to strictly black and red, or white and red (depending on what color it's resting on) would be nice.
Lastly.... I've discovered that this forum is such a nasty place for critique, everyone is a superstar professional is whatever you're asking about, whether it design, or photography, or english, and many are rather tactless in their delivery of 'critique'.
I appreciate the advice/critique of MacRumor's Members because they're always honest. I'd rather be told if my design/photo/website is poorly-designed rather than putting it up on the web as is.
About your design, I agree with the general census here. Designs is hard to read and I am being drawn into "Ron"
Good Luck
About your design, I agree with the general census here.
Designs is hard to read and I am being drawn into "Ron"Good Luck