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bntz313

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Original poster
Jul 11, 2007
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I just made this last nite it's not totally finished but here you go.

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just a design I thought of late night. Not for anything really

-Thanks
 
I'm not so sure about it. I can understand where you trying to go with it but it just doesn't seem to work well for me.

Maybe its the choice of colours being wrong, the n is definately out of context with the other colours. If you look at your main desig bit its all bold impact type colours and then the n is some wishy washy blue/grey colour.

If you wanted to play with colours, try doing a purely monotone version as this could have far more impact than the multiple colours you're currently using.

Another thing to consider is whether or not the poster is meant as a quick in your face impact or whether you want people to have to think to get its true meaning - it took me a couple of seconds to click that the letters made design.

Theres also more than one type of recognised sign language off the top of my head too - IIRC theres an american and a british english sign language. So taking that into consideration for an intended market might be worthwhile too.
 
I'm not so sure about it. I can understand where you trying to go with it but it just doesn't seem to work well for me.

Maybe its the choice of colours being wrong, the n is definately out of context with the other colours. If you look at your main desig bit its all bold impact type colours and then the n is some wishy washy blue/grey colour.

If you wanted to play with colours, try doing a purely monotone version as this could have far more impact than the multiple colours you're currently using.

Another thing to consider is whether or not the poster is meant as a quick in your face impact or whether you want people to have to think to get its true meaning - it took me a couple of seconds to click that the letters made design.

Theres also more than one type of recognised sign language off the top of my head too - IIRC theres an american and a british english sign language. So taking that into consideration for an intended market might be worthwhile too.


This was more or less just for me, not really trying to reach a certain market. I know that there is more than one type on sign language also.

This poster is made to make you think. It's suppose to have you wonder for a minute, if I was gonna make it easily readable than there wouldn't need to have sign language-just my 2 cents.

I do agree on the n, I couldn't really think of another color (now I'm thinking orange).

Thanks for the input though!:)
 
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