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backsidetailsli

macrumors 65816
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Aug 1, 2006
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Toronto!
hey! i would put this in the photoshop/tablet drawing thread but im kinda looking for some opinions. our band is recording our first album, which means we need to create some kind of album art. our drummer came up with the idea, i had some time today so i put it together. anyways shoot some opinions!

oh by the way, since it is a rough. the background color is for instance.. although i do kinda like it.
the "insert title here" is just a placeholder for where the actual title will be put. we havent come up with it yet..
albumvi1.jpg


edit* door has been fixed
 

klymr

macrumors 65816
May 16, 2007
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103
Utah
Personally, I love the style, but it seems too framed by the scratches around the outside edge. I'd 86 those and run that coat rack off the frame. Also, the door is bugging me. It seems to be open too much. It's swung back into the wall (which I didn't notice at first, probably because of the perspective of the door).

I'd say it's a pretty darn good start. Just toss around a few more ideas and see where it takes ya. Good luck!
 

backsidetailsli

macrumors 65816
Original poster
Aug 1, 2006
1,377
1
Toronto!
Personally, I love the style, but it seems too framed by the scratches around the outside edge. I'd 86 those and run that coat rack off the frame. Also, the door is bugging me. It seems to be open too much. It's swung back into the wall.

I'd say it's a pretty darn good start. Just toss around a few more ideas and see where it takes ya. Good luck!

yeah haha the door was the first thing one of my bandmates noticed. im gonna fix that up for sure
*done
 

backsidetailsli

macrumors 65816
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Aug 1, 2006
1,377
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Toronto!
ok so i fixed some shadows, but i really need suggestions. if you have eyes and fingers you should have no excuse not to post.
thanks
 

TEG

macrumors 604
Jan 21, 2002
6,625
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Langley, Washington
I like it. However, I would either add a single color (maybe a letter in red or the rat in blue) or go completely monotone/greyscale. The subdued blue can be hard on the eyes and many people cannot see the stains on the image in blues, whereas they could in greyscale (rods and cones and all that jazz). Just a thought.

TEG
 

backsidetailsli

macrumors 65816
Original poster
Aug 1, 2006
1,377
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Toronto!
yeah were a ska band, which is why we have a trombone.
the number on the door is actually the date of our first gig. april 13th. umm i needed a number for the door..
 

marykay9507

macrumors 6502a
Jan 18, 2008
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I think the trombone looks a little awkward.

I also think TEG suggestion about the rat in red might look pretty cool-- add a pop of color for something!

I like the frame, but it would probably look a little cleaner without it--

just my two cents! also, do you guys have a website or something...like ska and would like to hear?
 

UMHurricanes34

macrumors 65816
Sep 13, 2005
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Atlanta, GA
I actually really like it, and the "imperfections" that people have pointed out only add to the personality of the work.


I say keep this version and your new version :)
 

Adokimus

macrumors 6502a
Jun 2, 2007
842
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Boston, MA
I'd drop the hat down so it looks like it is hanging off the bar, it just a little awkward and you cannot assume there is a small rising bar there.


I really like it though. GJ

Yeah, not really sure how the hat would hang like that, even with the second bar below it. Hats, when hung, actually tilt the other way. You have it like it was on someone's head looking down like "\", but it should be wayy down like "/". But, I could be wrong. I also agree with another earlier post that the door opens into the wall. And I would love to see a warm color like bright red or hot pink and maybe yellow brighten and shake things up.

2 more cents.
 

bassproguy07

macrumors 6502a
Aug 13, 2008
704
0
Katy, TX
congrats on your new album, listened to the previews on iTunes, and it sounds pretty good. Not really into that genre, closest I can compare it to is Bag Of Toys lol.
 
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