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The recently built footbridge from the car park to the Adelaide airport terminal. One I will revisit at night for a colour version and hopefully they will have completed the building works in the courtyard to the right by then!


Nice! I really like it. Good composition.
 
The weir of an old water-powered mill...

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Looks under exposed. Hair blends with the background. You cut off your limbs in the wrong places.
 
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Tried this one in B & W, but prefer the colour. Let me know what you think.

My two-pennorth... B/W or colour: both would be fine, IMO.

You've drawn attention to a particular tree - the one on the right - but it makes a rather uninteresting shape. It also divides the picture in two, by breaking the frame at both top and bottom. The tree that interests me is the one in the centre, with both horizontal and vertical lines to play with: ie to hold the composition together rather than pulling it apart...
 
I think it works fine in color. The tones are near greyscale in quality, but the brown of the bark and blue of the mist give it a warm/cool dynamic that the black and white treatment would miss.

Dale

Thanks for the feedback

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My two-pennorth... B/W or colour: both would be fine, IMO.

You've drawn attention to a particular tree - the one on the right - but it makes a rather uninteresting shape. It also divides the picture in two, by breaking the frame at both top and bottom. The tree that interests me is the one in the centre, with both horizontal and vertical lines to play with: ie to hold the composition together rather than pulling it apart...

As usual you have pointed out something that I have totally missed! I will take that on board for my next outing (hopefully tomorrow, weather/family permitting).
 
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