Yikes.. I guess when someone thinks they do "ok" and then ask a public board you can really see where you stand and how far you have to go to be where you want to be. Feel like I have gone from being "ok" to completely sucky!! But I am thankful for the Constructive criticism but maybe photography isnt in my near future!!
You asked for a comparison to
professional work and criticism. If you aren't up to that, then I'd say that the first time you have to deal with an unhappy customer isn't going to be pleasant. Your composition isn't bad, other than a few things, but it's not up to what I'd consider professional standards.
The kid is amazingly cute. But you asked to be compared to professional standards. Sorry, but there are too many issues with these images to think of them as work that someone should be charging money for.
Can you show me where the first image contains any sharpness at all? We're not talking about "I added some Gaussian Blur to make the skin look nice." We're not even talking "The autofocus missed a bit and hit on the contrast of his eyebrow." That was the first image you presented. It's certainly not the best of the four, and if that's what you're going to lead with, then it says you're not ready or you haven't yet learned to evaluate your images critically. How many parents will pay money for an out-of-focus image of their kid? Would you? If someone showed you an image of their kid where the kid wasn't in focus anywhere in the image, would you ask to be referred to the photographer?
The other images are too small to evaluate well, but here are a few quick issues:
First image:
No catchlights in the eyes. This means the viewer can't connect with the subject. This is the death knell of a portrait.
Hair's all over the place.
Collar is over-exposed, distracting from the subject.
Subject's eyes are squinting.
Image is soft.
Second image:
No catchlights in the eyes.
Hair's all over the place.
Collar is over-exposed, distracting from the subject.
Chopped off subject's foot.
Image is soft.
Shirt is too wrinkled.
Pose/collar makes subject look neckless.
Third image:
Hair's all over the place.
Subject has a tree growing out of the top of his head.
Subject's fly appears to be open.
Hand position detracts from subject.
Subject's face is in shadow
Image is soft, however it doesn't kill this image as badly as the others- especially the first crop.
Off-center shirt opening makes it look like "pin the head on the kid."
Now, sure -- we often soften up portraits- Gaussian Blur, Stockings over lenses, Defocus lenses-- but it's on purpose and these days often more selective (sharpen the eyelashes, blur the pores and watch them drool.) This blur doesn't look intentional. Is it technique, or is it equipment? Is it a combination? Should someone who's charging money for their work know what causes their faults?
It also looks like the white balacne is off, though that could just be brighteners from detergent. White's a terrible color for portraits, your eye is drawn to the brightness, but it isn't the subject's face.
Overall, they wouldn't be bad if they were in focus, but by the same token, they wouldn't be something I'd expect out of someone who was a professional.
Paul