Quick critique.

[onthat]

Designed in Illustrator for the back of a deck of SOA sponsored playing cards, had to include logo and use the font provided. Final will be printed from a multichannel .eps file, two spot channels: PMS 186 C and PMS 877 C.

sorry about the size

 

[Lovesong]

Nice. I like the modern look, with the juxtaposed old-school shoes. One question I had was what that line down at the bottom (sorry, I didn't mean to draw on your work, I just wanted to point to what I was talking about):

Also- If you look around the letters, there seems to be a bit of tracks (around the school logo and the "a"). I would either make them more pronounced or clean them up. Good job

 

[onthat]

Part of a concrete slab, not sure how I missed that...thank you so much, I was preparing to turn this in along with some other work on Wednesday.

It will be printed from a press quality .eps file at 2.5"x3.5" so the tracks shouldn't be visible.

Thank you for the positive feedback
Very helpful!

 

[Lovesong]

Part of a concrete slab, not sure how I missed that...thank you so much, I was preparing to turn this in along with some other work on Wednesday.

It will be printed from a press quality .eps file at 2.5"x3.5" so the tracks shouldn't be visible.

Thank you for the positive feedback
Very helpful!

No worries, mate. It's what I do for a living.