Ok, by not-so-popular demand, here's a new monthly critique thread. Go ahead and tear into these. I'm very new at this and have very thick skin! Sort of a mishmash of photos from the last couple days with my new D40.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. It's funny you liked the spider, it was my least favorite.OK, I'll bite.
The spider is probably the most successful. The composition is really good, and we get a sense of a subject in its environment.
The flower is too centered and too distant, I think.
The Chevy shot would be nice if the lighting on the tail fin were better and if the reflection weren't some distracting parking lot in the distance. Otherwise, I think the lines of the photo are good.
The baby should be looking at us, not at something that is out of focus. Because the in-focus baby is looking away from us and nothing else is in focus, there is nowhere for the eye to rest, so the photo seems unresolved.
I like the lighting in the last shot, but I feel as though it's a photo without a subject. Could you maybe crop it to give the empty bench more emphasis? (Maybe crop out the street and just give us the sidewalk?) Just a thought.
very good man....keep it up... it too much of a noob to "critique it" hehe. Man these D40 are great aren't they? (I have one too! )
Anyways, thanks for the kind words. Also, I recropped that street photo this morning, and was wondering if this worked for you a little better, Phrasikleia...
The Chevy shot would be nice if the lighting on the tail fin were better and if the reflection weren't some distracting parking lot in the distance. Otherwise, I think the lines of the photo are good.
Can we enter our own photos?
Have at 'em
Can we enter our own photos?
Have at 'em
I like the composition of the first one and the warm colors on the mountains (where is that, by the way?). I wonder what could be done about the lighting, which seems rather dark in most of the shot. The solution that comes to mind is HDR, but perhaps someone else will have some suggestions.
I agree with mrgreen4242 that the entire bug, or at least just its head, should be in focus. I'm sure he wasn't the most patient model, though.
This was taken yesterday, my first use of my Rebel XSi. I am not happy with the way it turned out and I think it has to do with the technique. Too much going on, I guess? Anyway, the exposure came out a bit dark so I just upped it a touch with Aperture. Please give me some feedback, its appreciated!