Trifold Design Critique

[macgfxdesigner]

I am doing some more freelance work and this time its for a friend's sponsorship program in Haiti. All that was supplied from the client was the logo and some of the copy in the brochure...

Would love your opinion on the design and layout

The next project for me is to design them a website with the same look.

Thank in advance, Matt

 

[tobefirst ⚽️]

I would almost like to see the registration panel swapped with the inside-right panel (The one with 4500 real big on it). I think that the 4500 panel seems kind of out of place right now. It's making an important statement, but it's in one of the least prominent positions. I'd like to see it to where, when the trifold is first opened, and you see only two panels, you see it.

 

[LeviG]

I know this is going to sound daft but why are you asking us for critique, why aren't you asking the client, they are after all the ones the work is being done for.

But the main thing I will pick up on is the girl and boy, they need to be cut out better, they look like they were done in a rush to me.