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awayguns

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Mar 12, 2007
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http://www.xii-ii.com/

I used a template from flash village and edited it a bit. Please check if it loads properly in your browsers. Comments are greatly appreciated too! Thank you.
 
I like it. Nice and simple. You got the animation levels just right, anymore 'movement' and the site would have looked too 'busy' in my opinion.

Good job.
 
Scrap it and start from scratch.

1. For one thing, you are not Nike, Walmart, Best Buy, etc.. , what I mean is you don't have name brand recognition. Your site is completely built in flash and google robots do not index the content with-in a flash movie. You want to have SEO if you are trying bring people in from the web search engines. If that is not important then I guess don't worry about this part.

2. That is your first problem and major one in my opinion.

3. Second one, I believe the less is more theory make the best websites.

4. This site would be hard to update since it is built in Flash. I believe Flash has the best impact when it is used in small portions on a website.

Last, it is so plain, meaning the style looks like it came from a template.
 
Also, you loose focus. What are you selling? It is hard to tell you are selling clothing if that is what you are selling? You should focus the site around your product and brand. Your product should wow your customer not the flash page turning each time they click a link. Too much movement.
 
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