What do you think of this app description?

[akacaj]

Hey, what do you guys think of this app description? Is it too harsh?

Uh oh, did one of your friends just lay an iFart? Unleash the whip on them with iFight! Your other friend just showed you how he can drink a virtual beer with his iPhone. Quick give him a slap with iFight for being stupid!

iFight turns your iPhone into a toy weapon. Simply choose one of the four sound effects: slap, whip, sword or punch and then perform the action by swinging your phone to hear the sound. These are four essential sound effects that you should never leave home without!

You can use it to virtually slap your friends silly or punch them in the face. Whip your employees and command them to work harder. Engage in virtual Kung Fu fights. The possibilities are endless!

This is a very simple app, yet very entertaining!

Who can resist making a whip sound when making fun of a buddy who is whipped by his girlfriend? With iFight you will always be prepared no matter what the funny situation is!

Remember this app is for entertainment only.
Please use responsibly.
Do not really hit people with your phone.
Hold on to your phone tight during use.
Not responsible for any damages or harm caused by the misuse of this application.

Enjoy!

Made in New York.

 

[LePigeonBleu]

I have to say, it's a funny app, but no, it's not too harsh. Looks good to me.

 

[KRAPPS]

Sure you want to call out iFart ... you did not with iBeer, rather kept it vague ... just a thought, you could just change iFart to fart

 

[okaive]

I would rather do all those sounds myself or actually slap the person with my hand then look like a fool swinging my phone around.

 

[jmann]

Sure you want to call out iFart ... you did not with iBeer, rather kept it vague ... just a thought, you could just change iFart to fart

I completely agree. But I think it would sound better "Uh oh, did one of your friends just lay a virtual Fart?"

 

[akacaj]

I didn't really mean it in a way to call out any particular iFart App. By iFart i mean virtual fart. Just curious why do you think it is a bad idea anyway? I just thought its funny. Guess maybe I should change it.

 

[KRAPPS]

I didn't really mean it in a way to call out any particular iFart App. By iFart i mean virtual fart. Just curious why do you think it is a bad idea anyway? I just thought its funny. Guess maybe I should change it.

Bad idea IMHO because there is an app called iFart and you are singling out this particular app ... I realize that was not your intention, but since there is an app named iFart (and an app named iFart Mobile), you are calling them out.

Sort of like if you had said - did your friend just drink an iBeer.

If you change iFart to fart, it should take care of the issue ... however it's totally your call.

 

[Lamplighter77]

I would leave iFart in there and maybe add iBeer too. That way when someone searches those in the app store your app will come up in there results...

 

[akacaj]

I decided to leave it as is for the time being. I don't feel like I am calling out the iFart app. Specifically because I refer to the action of iFarting rather than the app itself.

On another note, i just got word from apple that version 1.1 is ready for download. Those of you that got the free promo codes please update before writing a review.

 

[Stevenup7002]

This is a very good description, It advertises the app well.