It's nice, background is a little too busy though.
Acsom thanks for the explanation, but I have a question, just so I can I understand better. Forgive me first for my english. When I took this particular picture, I saw the background is kind of distracting, because the background is kind of orange color, the fax machine right behind her, the black lcd in front of her, that's why when I took this picture, I frame it tight. I agree with marsman478 after retrospect. You're right, I'm still a very beginner in seeing the scene, for that is there any good book that I can read?
Stagi, thanks I will try it next time
Thanks all for the critiques, I'm really appreciate it, and I do want to be better, that's why I need more critique, read more book, shoot alot more like Acsom's sugestion. Thanks again
I don't like the angle of the shot and the image seems a bit too hot for my liking. What are you trying to convey with the photo? What or who is the subject? If her hair was the subject then you did better, but if she was the subject she looks like she is ignoring you. You also cut off her head which is not something you should do with a person as the subject.
If you are new to photography don't buy anything further. Just shoot lots of photos and play for a while. Also, people are the hardest subjects to really get right in my opinion. Good luck...
unfortunately you're right. When I took that picture, I frame it like that. I can see what you mean, after I browsed the internet about composition, and read what you write. Correct me if I'm wrong, what you mean for this particular shot is , it will be a better picture, if I can convey the surrounding environment at that time, so it will give more story (like what's she's doing, or something like that), am I right?Post it uncropped so we can see it; maybe there isn't a photograph there.
Correct me if I'm wrong, what you mean for this particular shot is , it will be a better picture, if I can convey the surrounding environment at that time, so it will give more story (like what's she's doing, or something like that), am I right?
sorry, if I asks a lot of questions. I've read the "Bryan Peterson's Understanding Exposure", will definitely find another book.
Thanks again
I'm glad you ask a lot of questions. Remember to verify all the answers you get, though; just because I'm answering doesn't mean I'm right. I THINK I am, but I'm not an expert, just another guy learning as I go along. This happens to be an area where I've already made the same mistakes, and I think I can help.
In this instance, yes. It doesn't have to tell a story, but pictures with people often do. Also, though, the subject has no room to breathe; the shot is claustrophobic. Look at the lines in the upper left corner, and the shoulders, and even the headphones, although they fork; all the lines lead to the center. The swoop of the hair is nice, but it just forms a whorl around the face, it doesn't offset the lines. That isn't bad in and of itself, the closed in feeling, but it doesn't do anything for this particular subject. Everything is drawn to the center, and she's shutting it out by ignoring it. If there is a story, the story is, "just another person who won't/didn't/doesn't make eye contact during a typical day."
Now, think of the same shot, the same place, except she is looking up at the camera and beaming, smiling. Everything is pointing toward the center and she is like the sun. Give her some more room around the edges, let her free some. It might not work as a photo, but it also might, with everything radiating to and from a beautiful and friendly face. Try the shot with her centered, then try it with her out of the center, see what looks better. Then think of why you like one or the other better.
(That is what I mean when say I think about photos sometimes for several days before taking them. I put them together in my mind, then when I am ready they look exactly like I want them to. Sometimes they aren't as good as I expect them to be, but often they are, and that is very satisfying when that happens.)