design critique

[rillrems]

ok thanx ill try to fix that

 

[CMD is me]

Simplify the type and create more contrast. The design needs a focus, especially in the type. You need to be able to read it in about a third of a second. If you can't, you lose any browsers. Good start. Just needs some tweaking.

 

[janitorC7]

I still really just do not like "the Best" text. it seems to Tonka Truck

 

[rillrems]

i think im going to change the text and try to find a better layout for it