How Could This Be Improved

[Designer Dale]

You still have the grammar wrong. It needs to be either "Jack's Podcast" or "Jack's Podcasts". "Jack's" is possessive. Jack made the Podcast. "Podcasts" are plural. "Jack Podcasts" doesn't sound right. If "Podcast" has become a verb, something like "Jack Podcasts Your World" might do. I'm old...

Note: Taught elementary school for 22 years.

Dale

 

[techfreak85]

Are you saying that i should change it into a different 8th note to avoid confusion?

make it a qtr note.

 

[JackT06]

You still have the grammar wrong. It needs to be either "Jack's Podcast" or "Jack's Podcasts". "Jack's" is possessive. Jack made the Podcast. "Podcasts" are plural. "Jack Podcasts" doesn't sound right. If "Podcast" has become a verb, something like "Jack Podcasts Your World" might do. I'm old...

Note: Taught elementary school for 22 years.

Dale

Oh bummmsss so i have. Sorry about that. Just edited it and saved it

 

[JackT06]

Thanks Ever Soo Much For You Help

Do you mean something likes this?

 

[ezekielrage_99]

Using all your comments and suggestions i put this together. I personally think this is alot better than the original but as allays there is still room for improvement, what do you think?

I know im going to have to change the color of the music but what shade because it cant be to bright now :L

That is really coming together nicely I really like the direction, it's clear and concise. I would tweak the note a little to make it more "J" like, but it looking really good

Absolutely!!! No apostrophe!!!

I thought it didn't look right.. Although I hadn't had my morning coffee yet

 

[JackT06]

That is really coming together nicely I really like the direction, it's clear and concise. I would tweak the note a little to make it more "J" like, but it looking really good



I thought it didn't look right.. Although I hadn't had my morning coffee yet

How could i tweak it to make it more like a "j" do you think?


Ye i also like the way its all pulling together. And its all thanks to people like you on MacRumors

 

[ezekielrage_99]

Basically carving out the circle to be the curve in the "J"

 

[JackT06]

Should i add anything else to it?

 

[a cat *miaow*]

The note being a different colour just makes the first word read "acks".

I would say it's not a great idea to the J a different colour and not the same type as the rest. Do one not both.

 

[JackT06]

The note being a different colour just makes the first word read "acks".

I would say it's not a great idea to the J a different colour and not the same type as the rest. Do one not both.

Thanks For The advice



Does anybody have a good idea of how i could put the email in it because this logo will be going on letters, newsletters ect

 

[Jim Campbell]

Are you saying that i should change it into a different 8th note to avoid confusion?

Just straightening it up would probably make it more recognisable as a 'J'.

Incidentally, if these are podcasts by Jack, then the grammatically correct choice is: "Jack's Podcasts".

Cheers

Jim

Edit to add: Oh ... there's a Page 2 where you go through all this stuff. Ignore me ... as you were.