Logo Critique....:-)

[Mydriasis]

I like it better

 

[johnathan.macle]

Hi, I was wondering if you guys could Critique my logo aswell.

AtomicSource.org

It has been based of a design I seen, it incorpirates the letters A & S and also manages to look a little bit like an atom. Any suggestions please dont hesitate to make them

P.S. I know their is a slight kink in the joint fom A to S.......im working on it

 

[mustard]

Hi, I was wondering if you guys could Critique my logo aswell.

AtomicSource.org

It has been based of a design I seen, it incorpirates the letters A & S and also manages to look a little bit like an atom. Any suggestions please dont hesitate to make them

P.S. I know their is a slight kink in the joint fom A to S.......im working on it

For some reason I can't get passed the idea of it looking like a pentagram

 

[SBT]

Yeh, i like the last one switters. Nice one. Although if the special "L" was something important then it also seems ok to have that in. The 2 are similar, possibly the normal "L" being simpler.

 

[e-coli]

Fix the type weight. All the letters including the "A" should be the same weight.

And IMO, I'm not crazy about that font.

Have you tried Avant Garde Alternate? Might be nice and subtle while still typographically solid.

 

[e-coli]

Hi, I was wondering if you guys could Critique my logo as well.

Anarchy!!!!!

I don't see the "S" at all, and it doesn't really look like an atom. Keep going. You can do better.

 

[ATD]

And IMO, I'm not crazy about that font.

Same here. The font doesn't come across as an architectural font, particularly for a firm that has Angular in the name.

 

[ATD]

Hi, I was wondering if you guys could Critique my logo aswell.

AtomicSource.org

It has been based of a design I seen, it incorpirates the letters A & S and also manages to look a little bit like an atom. Any suggestions please dont hesitate to make them

P.S. I know their is a slight kink in the joint fom A to S.......im working on it

Same as what others said, it doesn't read as atomic. I see a lot of people try to use objects to create letterforms and they seem only to work a small percentage of the time. It's usually a case that the objects read but the letters don't, the letters read but the object don't or it can look very cartoon like. In this one the A reads but the S doesn't and I don't see the object as atomic. It might work far better to use regular type forms with a hint of the atomic circles around it.

 

[dogbone]

Switters,

I can't see that typeface working for the reason that it is a non angular font so that it doesn't sit well with the 'angular' theme.

I like the initial A and I think it is a strong enough motif to be able to work without the red bit.

 

[MacBoobsPro]

I havent read all the posts. Sorry im quite busy. But when it comes to logos the more simple the better.

So eyup's is the direction to take in my book

aye snark is right - not sure if this looks architechturish enough tho...