new logo. critiques welcome

[iBlue]

I like the first and the third of the newest series.

 

[tobefirst ⚽️]

A much better start! It allows us to critique one thing at a time, which will help tremendously.

Honestly, I don't see what the top horizontal line adds to the design. It doesn't say anything "fun" or "artsy" or anything like that...it just seems to "be there." I favor the bottom design of the ones you just listed.

The font choice conveys (to me) a contemporary, solid business.

Perhaps you might want to look for a way to convey the "artsy-ness" of your business with a (perhaps slightly) different font, or face of this font. A simple italic might add some movement to the logo...

Play around!

 

[Peyton]

hey, what about using the 3rd on (of the b/w set) and extending the 'tail' of the k back wards to line up with the diagonal of the t.

so that the end of the k runs right alongside of the top of the t.

could be cool

 

[XNine]

The third one is the best by far. Much more streamlined then the rest, and the "t" doesn't get in the way or obscure the line going from "f" to "k."

Good job. And I think the motto is "if it looks good in B&W, it'll look good in color." Maybe it's the other way around. Color the third and post back with it, I'm interested.

 

[marchcapital]

i like it...whats it for?

 

[dogbone]

Looks like it was going to be between 1 and 3. We just couldn't bring ourselves to go with 3, the traditional sloping t just didn't seem right. So 1 it is then. Unless of course it changes completely.

Here's our first new take on the colours, in rgb.

MC: hand silk screened art t-shirts with playful, provocative, bawdy, designs.