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on the back, you wrote "loose any prospective buyers"... I'm pretty sure that should be "lose any prospective buyers"

("lose" not "loose")
 
Onizuka said:
I would put dots or dashes before each point of use for "What is QTVR?"

Don't do it, it'll look like a cheap home-made powerpoint. Avoid bullets [mid-point dots], the capitalization you already used does the trick and looks more professional.
 
The size of the picture of the camera on the back side deifinitely works better. A bit too much emphasis on the camera, but I gareewith you, if the only thing you see is the panaromic picture of the interior shot, I might just think "another one of those interior decoration mailers" and throw it out. I think having the camera and the large QTVR statement is a very goo idea.
 
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