This week, a two-parter:
Episode 6: The Vampires of Venice pleasantly surprised me. Even better, it surprised me that it surprised me. Toby Whitehouse, the cur, was responsible for School Reunion, which is the episode that reintroduced Sarah Jane Smith to the series and sacrificed her original relationship with Tom Baker's Doctor (which was as a curious journalist and later a friend) in order to heighten the melodrama of then-companion Rose's jealousy. It was a gigantic pity, and the episode featured a pretty stupid monster to boot. There's really very little of School Reunion in The Vampires of Venice, though. Okay, the monster's pretty stupid, in the sense that they can be obliterated by a sun bunny reflected by Amy's pocket mirror, but on the other hand, they are guided by a real philosophy - that it might be acceptable to sacrifice the city of Venice in order to preserve their own entire race. Never mind the line, "then we will take your world" in the pre-credits sequence, every single aspect in which is almost immediately contradicted after the episode starts properly. For example, the apparent importance of the steward in the court, or that Guido begins the episode begging the Venetian nobility to take his daughter, but after the credits is begging them to give her back again. Der.
However, Guido is moderately more interesting than the usual guest-star-in-distress. The theme of Venetian pride runs through the whole episode, starting with the Doctor describing the magnificent the city to Amy and Rory. It's artful that this sense of pride motivates Guido, giving him a motive for his sacrifice that, although still slight, is a whole lot better than nothing.
This is one of the reasons that The Vampires of Venice gets a passing grade. Another of these is the story's embracement of the fairy tale theme that has been running through this season. We get a sort of betrothal without love situation as Guido gives up his daughter to the Venetian court (who are, naturally, vampires/giant fish), but most interesting is that the Doctor and his team fail to rescue her and she gets devoured in an horrific way. (Not to mention the scene when we realise she can't escape she's too far gone.) Toby Whitehouse is bold in this and several other ways, for example when he cuts from Rosanna Calvierri just after she sinks her teeth into Amy's neck.
All this vampirism and gothisism benefits from the shadowy setting of Venice (and only more so as the aliens' terraforming device goes to work). There are some great, torchlit corridors, slimy sewers, domed candlelit rooms, and scenes creeping across the moonlit courtyards of Venice. Light is important in this episode, as it should be in a vampire story, and this shows in the production. (However, I would complain that it was not important enough. It was never explained exactly why these fish people are so averse to light, and the explanation that the Doctor gives about why they can't be seen in mirrors is fairly petty. After all, why would the Doctor's brain edit out monsters when he of all people would be the least surprised to find a grotesque alien lurking over his shoulder? Combined with the perception filter device that the aliens carry, it's one too many levels of illusion and only really services the already tenuous vampire analogy.)
The Venetian setting is in various ways reminiscent of The Androids of Tara, The Masque of Mandragora, and State of Decay from the original series. This isn't a bad thing, because the other "historical" episodes that Nu Who has attempted have not been particularly reminiscent of anything, not even history. This is certainly because unlike those episodes, the setting in The Vampires of Venice is important to the story. The aliens are amphibious, which is a perfect match in Venice, where streets run into rivers, and the history of Venice itself (which the Doctor remarks was once one of the greatest cities in the world) reflects the doomed nature of their race. In fact, Guido's sacrifice as he shouts something nationalistic would have been cringeworthy if it didn't reflect the aliens' desperate urge to preserve their own nation.
There are some other great moments. I don't know the extent to which Moffat edited the scripts of his collaborators, but the Doctor's lines are sterling and crisp, constantly delivering wit and remark with acuity. No amount of mythologizing about the Doctor does as much good to convince us of his mental powers as simply showing us how clever he is. Whitehouse gets to show us his "clever" too, playing against instead of into our expectations about the vampire enemy. In Victory of the Daleks we knew beforehand that a) there were going to be Daleks, based on the title, and b) that they were going to, of course, be evil in some fairly stereotypical ways. Gatiss did not disappoint. As a modern audience, we are pretty genre-educated, so we also know what to expect from vampires. It's pretty cheeky, then, when we get scenes like Rosanna "hydrating" from a chalice that we think must be blood, and it turns out to be water. (And only later do we realise how appropriate this is - retroactive realisation is the best kind.) Another one is when the Doctor climbs the tower at the climax of the film, and discovers a whirling, complex machine. After a moment of frightened observation, he turns it off with a single switch. Subverting cliches like this marshals our attention far more effectively than any quantity of melodrama (and there are examples of this too, like the Doctor's condemnation of the aliens because they "didn't remember her [Isabella's] name," as opposed to the many other more rational reasons why he might refuse to help them).
My favourite moment in the episode is when Rosanna's perception filter malfunctions on the stairs after Amy has conveniently kicked it, and briefly she transforms into her natural, crustaceanlike form. The court steward spooks in the most convincing way I think I've ever seen, jumping with real horror when she shifts and stabilises. For a character like the steward that never speaks but is always there (perhaps more so because of it), this lends diegetic credence to the terror that we are supposed to feel alongside him. It's also an example of another subverted cliche, as the steward never turns on his masters, or indeed does anything at all. This one scene reminded me a little of the brand of horror that the original series often touted, when for example Count Scarlioni reveals himself as an abomination in City of Death, or in Revelation of the Daleks when one of the characters finds the grotesque, pustulating abomination of his father after he has been genetically altered to fit inside a dalek machine. There are many other great examples.
All in all The Vampires of Venice was a great step for the new series. Moffat once said that he should never be put in charge of Doctor Who because he would make it like the Williams era of the show (the goofy, self-referential period during some of which Douglas Adams was script editor and Tom Baker was allegedly 'off the leash'). This is the first time the comparison can be called apt, and Moffat's statement finally proven to be ironic.
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Episode 7: Amy's Choice was such a wasted opportunity. I was not expecting wonders from Simon Nye, but the opportunity to play with the concept of dreams and allegory was so crushingly wasted that I am hard pressed to articulate my disappointment. There were so many elements that were interesting in and of themselves, such as the idea of a Dreamlord, a cold sun, or the actually-interesting observation that "the old man prefers the company of the young." This episode squandered them all.
Besides the fact that the premise is based entirely on a coincidence where stardust of some kind gets into the Tardis mechanism, the situation that we're asked to buy into at the beginning of the episode is so unbelievably dumb that it's impossible to care about it all the way through to the end. Amy is asked by an omnipotent being to make an artificial "choice" between two scenarios, one of which will result in their deaths
except Nye makes it pretty damn clear to the audience which one he prefers ("this village is so DULL"), and then goes on to mock the choice Amy makes by making it irrelevant (they were BOTH dreams, oh my god!). What's worse is that what efficacy Amy might have in making the choice is stolen when Rory dies and the choice is basically made for her. The metaphor is as clunky as Nye's dialogue, which tries too hard to be clever (bow ties, eh) and only occasionally succeeds with lines like "something here doesn't make sense
let's go and poke it with a stick." Actually, once in a while bad lines and bad metaphors converge with verbal abominations like "we have to grow up eventually."
The greatest problem with the dialogue is that rapid delivery is mistaken for wit, and since so much of it is just delivering information (with maybe a quip on the end), it just reads like someone speed-reading a fairy tale, which is not, I expect, what Moffat intended.
The entire village plot is only made endurable by the tenuous pleasure of watching zombified octogenarians attack the main characters. The old people turn out to be a "proud and ancient race" of aliens (surprise) with the most uninspired motivation and ability the writing team could dream up (heh). In fact, the suggestion that these petrifying-gas-spitting eye creatures came from the imaginations of Amy, Rory, and the Doctor does a great disservice to my respect for these characters. And the writer.
It's one big, twisted ripoff of Star Trek: The Next Generation's finale, All Good Things
where an omnipotent being forces Captain Jean-Luc Picard to shift from scenario to scenario in order to prove himself. Sound anything like this? And since we're on the subject:
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