Tips on making my web/portfolio stand out: UPDATE Revision 3 and top 2

[2Sticky]

Version 7 my fav, not sure on the font used for 'design' on version 2.

 

[SwiftLives]

Two chosen from this pile
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2153/2231833427_04c0e5c6a1.jpg

My only advice for version 2 is to reflect the the curve on the outside of the 'N' with the curve of the overlapping 'M'. It looks a bit unbalanced as it is right now.

I also really like 'DESIGNS' underneath the logo. Better than along the side, despite what I said earlier.

Personally, I like the serif font you used for 'DESIGNS'. I think it complements the typography for the main logo pretty well.

You're close.

 

[kitki83]

My only advice for version 2 is to reflect the the curve on the outside of the 'N' with the curve of the overlapping 'M'. It looks a bit unbalanced as it is right now.

I also really like 'DESIGNS' underneath the logo. Better than along the side, despite what I said earlier.

Personally, I like the serif font you used for 'DESIGNS'. I think it complements the typography for the main logo pretty well.

You're close.

I think I get what you are saying is that instead of concave curve make it parallel to the M?

I want to give my appreciation to everyone really helping me. I am thrilled that my personal focus group (graphic designer friends) and the internet seem to be on same route.

 

[bluetooth]

Nice work. I like how you evolved the initial design and would opt for version 7 myself.