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Hughmac

macrumors 603
Feb 4, 2012
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Kent, UK
Hi guys. Sorry for the delay. No internet here since Friday! I've written a longer version with critique for all on my Mac which I can post tomorrow.
But at the moment airdrop and tethering are not working.

1st place Stillcrazyman.

2nd place dmb8021

3rd place deep diver.

More to follow....
That's one of the worst things that can happen in modern times. Strange how cut off you can feel ;)
We lost our internet for a couple of days last week, but I managed to tether to the iPhone.

Congrats to the winners, all the entries were great, so a difficult choice I imagine.

Cheers :)

Hugh
 
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Apple fanboy

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Feb 21, 2012
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Behind the Lens, UK
That's one of the worst things that can happen in modern times. Strange how cut off you can feel ;)
We lost our internet for a couple of days last week, but I managed to tether to the iPhone.

Congrats to the winners, all the entries were great, so a difficult choice I imagine.

Cheers :)

Hugh
I can my work computer, but not my iMac. Not sure why as I've done it via USB on both! Grrrrrr!
 
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Apple fanboy

macrumors Ivy Bridge
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Feb 21, 2012
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Behind the Lens, UK
Internet now back up! Here is the promised delayed critique





As always I’m a rank amateur so feel free to ignore my comments! Thanks for taking the time to post!



@Alexander.Of.Oz

I liked this image when I first saw it, and it fits the theme well. Kind of reminds me of a dancing lady though. A head, the arms held out stretched and a floaty dress.

If I had to be picky I’d say that the posts are a little distracting, but not that much!


@keyrex

I see you got all your ducks in a row for this one! Id maybe suggest a tighter crop so they aren’t central to the image by loosing the bank at the back. But fits the theme very well!


@kenoh

A beautiful scene. As an image I’d go a little wider if possible to not cut off the house on the left (assuming this is possible and there isn’t a row of wheelie bins!). It doesn’t scream the number three at me, but I love the image all the same.


@deep diver

An excellent interpretation! This would fit in to one of those shots I see other people take and try to emulate, then look at my own and hit delete! But the timing here and the eye to catch the image are spot on!


@inkmich

Well there are three of them! But If they were doing something a bit more interesting I’d like it more (like standing in a pyramid!). Also to my eye I’d adjust the WB a bit as it looks quite warm. But another shot that fits the theme well.


@stillcrazyman

Are a beautiful shot. It wouldn’t fit the theme as well but have you tried cutting off the boat on the right so it was just the two with a fair bit of negative space? As I think the composition would look good in my head.


@Janichsan

Another great interpretation and an interesting back story too. To fit the theme better, you could go back at 3 O’clock!


@mollyc

Well I remember when a birthday cake meant candles and the like. I think you caught this just at the right moment.



@pmexperience

Seeing Grand central station always reminds me of X-men! But a good shot. I wonder if a tripod and just a bit of motion blur in the people would look good? Just a thought.


@oblomow

How very Dutch! But I think this would be better for my next contest in June! A nice pair of….. gates!


@dmb8021

What a lovely image. It fits the theme beautifully as well. Id be tempted to push the contrast up a bit, but other than that, spot on.


@Hughmac

I can never make my mind up about the lensbaby affect? Do I like it or not? But a lovely set of daffodils, which is a sure sign spring is coming! Just a pity you had no nice sunshine!


@needfx

Are you a leg short? Instant disqualification as its not got three legs and its not a Gitzo!


@macuser453787

This would be an image you took specifically for this weeks contest? I like the fact that it is simple in its composition, yet works well for the theme. Well done.



Ok guys and girls.

Thanks for taking the time to submit and listening to my ramblings!


1st Place stillcrazyman as it looks great and fulfills the subject well.


2nd Place dmb8021 for a beautiful mountain scene


3rd Place deep diver for creativity with the theme!


Over to you stillcrazyman!
 

Alexander.Of.Oz

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Oct 29, 2013
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@Alexander.Of.Oz

I liked this image when I first saw it, and it fits the theme well. Kind of reminds me of a dancing lady though. A head, the arms held out stretched and a floaty dress.

If I had to be picky I’d say that the posts are a little distracting, but not that much!
Thanks for the feedback, @Apple fanboy , I'm glad your indynet is back on again. Those sticks in the background are what everyone comes to this beach to capture! I thought I'd try having them in the background, but softly... I have to agree with you, they irk me a tad! I think if they were in focus, they might not be so annoying to me. o_O
 

Apple fanboy

macrumors Ivy Bridge
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Feb 21, 2012
57,039
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Behind the Lens, UK
Thanks for the feedback, @Apple fanboy , I'm glad your indynet is back on again. Those sticks in the background are what everyone comes to this beach to capture! I thought I'd try having them in the background, but softly... I have to agree with you, they irk me a tad! I think if they were in focus, they might not be so annoying to me. o_O
Well they don't irk me that much! I love the image, just from a pure contest subject, they didn't quite fit as well. Normally I prefer these stones in B&W. but like the colour contrast of sky and stone.
 
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kenoh

macrumors 604
Jul 18, 2008
6,507
10,850
Glasgow, UK
Internet now back up! Here is the promised delayed critique





As always I’m a rank amateur so feel free to ignore my comments! Thanks for taking the time to post!



@Alexander.Of.Oz

I liked this image when I first saw it, and it fits the theme well. Kind of reminds me of a dancing lady though. A head, the arms held out stretched and a floaty dress.

If I had to be picky I’d say that the posts are a little distracting, but not that much!


@keyrex

I see you got all your ducks in a row for this one! Id maybe suggest a tighter crop so they aren’t central to the image by loosing the bank at the back. But fits the theme very well!


@kenoh

A beautiful scene. As an image I’d go a little wider if possible to not cut off the house on the left (assuming this is possible and there isn’t a row of wheelie bins!). It doesn’t scream the number three at me, but I love the image all the same.


@deep diver

An excellent interpretation! This would fit in to one of those shots I see other people take and try to emulate, then look at my own and hit delete! But the timing here and the eye to catch the image are spot on!


@inkmich

Well there are three of them! But If they were doing something a bit more interesting I’d like it more (like standing in a pyramid!). Also to my eye I’d adjust the WB a bit as it looks quite warm. But another shot that fits the theme well.


@stillcrazyman

Are a beautiful shot. It wouldn’t fit the theme as well but have you tried cutting off the boat on the right so it was just the two with a fair bit of negative space? As I think the composition would look good in my head.


@Janichsan

Another great interpretation and an interesting back story too. To fit the theme better, you could go back at 3 O’clock!


@mollyc

Well I remember when a birthday cake meant candles and the like. I think you caught this just at the right moment.



@pmexperience

Seeing Grand central station always reminds me of X-men! But a good shot. I wonder if a tripod and just a bit of motion blur in the people would look good? Just a thought.


@oblomow

How very Dutch! But I think this would be better for my next contest in June! A nice pair of….. gates!


@dmb8021

What a lovely image. It fits the theme beautifully as well. Id be tempted to push the contrast up a bit, but other than that, spot on.


@Hughmac

I can never make my mind up about the lensbaby affect? Do I like it or not? But a lovely set of daffodils, which is a sure sign spring is coming! Just a pity you had no nice sunshine!


@needfx

Are you a leg short? Instant disqualification as its not got three legs and its not a Gitzo!


@macuser453787

This would be an image you took specifically for this weeks contest? I like the fact that it is simple in its composition, yet works well for the theme. Well done.



Ok guys and girls.

Thanks for taking the time to submit and listening to my ramblings!


1st Place stillcrazyman as it looks great and fulfills the subject well.


2nd Place dmb8021 for a beautiful mountain scene


3rd Place deep diver for creativity with the theme!


Over to you stillcrazyman!

Great feedback...

Yep I hear ya.... no wheelie bins just an old beat up VW Passat.... :)
 

inkmich

macrumors 6502a
Mar 31, 2016
816
6,496
Maryland

Having been in this very same spot a little over a week ago I very much appreciate how well this image came out. Let's just my image is not as nice as this. One has to have a plan to photograph in this space and know what you are doing. I believe I know a little bit of what I'm doing but I certainly didn't have a plan. :)
 
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pmxperience

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Aug 12, 2011
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Having been in this very same spot a little over a week ago I very much appreciate how well this image came out. Let's just my image is not as nice as this. One has to have a plan to photograph in this space and know what you are doing. I believe I know a little bit of what I'm doing but I certainly didn't have a plan. :)

Thanks for the kind words!

This was actually a 4 image stitch. Looking back, I would've done a few things differently. Namely using a tripod, longer exposures, waiting for better lighting, etc...
 
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