Vulcan Bomber at Royal International Air Tattoo 2009
Sunset at Rodeo Beach, San Francisco
Thanks for the critique Maxxamillian! I really appreciate it. Yeah, of the 3, I'm happiest with the first one. I can understand what you are saying with the second one as well. I didn't have a long enough lens with me to really get the focus on the fisherman, so on a whim I jsut tried to juxtapose his sillhouette in that setting.... I think if I had been closer, the framing and the composition would have been better as well.
As for the third pic, do you think a composition like this is more appropriate?
MUCH better. Better composure and less guesswork
I was trying to capture the scale of the whole view - but it does seem a little bland.
Next up :-
How did I miss this? The smoothness of the water and subtle colors throughout really works for this picture!
I think that'd benefit from being a bit brighter, and maybe a tighter crop. But I can't think of many planes better the Vulcan befitting a nice silhouette.
Wow, I am really impressed by the photographs here; I am really glad so many people have decided to participate. As soon as the sun comes out here in Minnesota I'll be joining in myself.
I want to draw everyone's attention to the fact we need a topic for the next challenge. I have setup a thread here to discuss the next topic. Please come and suggest new topics. If no one participates then the challenges are going to die out. The new challenge starts in a week.
John