Good to know it’s actually working in VMs. As for iCloud - that’s working. The problem is FaceTime and iMessage. Please try to sign in into them and kindly report back your results.
Well I tried to sign in to iCloud under VMWare Fusion Pro 8.58 and it refused to let me sign in. I peeked at the console and it looked like the system was in a loop much like is described above. iCloud just sat there on the login dialog with a spinning "waiting" circle which lasted forever before I gave up (it eventually gave up too but I wasn't around to see it). '
For the record, I installed Developer Release 7 with APFS which boots correctly in the VM. But there is some kind of bug with iCloud and APFS that seems to be a problem with some configurations, especially unrecognized machines. Apple may not care that much about the efforts of this forum, but I'm sure that they do care about High Sierra working in virtualization.
VMWare Fusion 10 gets released in a few weeks and I don't know if there will be a difference. Parallels has already released a High Sierra compatible version this past week but I don't own a copy.