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I love this challenge, even if – like the self-portrait challenge – I'm not finding it easy.
This the best effort so far, even though the "negative" space has more figure than the "positive" cityscape.
It's perhaps an interesting point: the more empty space in terms of physicality is actually more positive in terms of visual weight; while by contrast the physically "full" building skyline is (because it's blocked up) visually more empty (and would be even more if I were to 'shop out the pins of window lights and streetlights.)
Thanks , it looks much better!
To understand better the rule of thirds, is it enough that the most important part of the subject touches one of the lines or one of the 4 crossing points?
I tried to recenter one of the roses, where the vase is not that important but the rose bud is .
Any closer?i’d love to see more negative space. negative = absence of…. there is more ben than emptiness imo. i’d try to have your subject no more than a third of the frame.
(ps you can cheat and extend the canvas 😉)
Nicely done. It gives a different feel when you see it. Ben has room to breathe and changes it from a picture OF Ben to ABOUT Ben.
If it’s not a negative “space” this one, what it is?! 👍💖I took this early Sunday morning, but just realized this is a negative space photo.
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Which kind of focus do you keep selected with the grid?One of the first things I do when I get a camera is turn on the thirds grid. It’s handy to have on and makes me think more about composition.
Zone or single point. You can use any, really, as you can always move the focus point around using the d-pad or thumb stick if your camera has one.Which kind of focus do you keep selected with the grid?
Yep, all bets are off when it comes to wildlife - especially birds in flight…. You get what you get and hope you can fix it later by cropping. Well that’s the technique I rely on anyway. 😊@kenoh Thanks a lot for your help!
I got the idea. Not easy to focus and move on the side, or up and down.
Now on my cameras I keep the lines visible 🙂 I changed the camera focus to “Track point” .
Anyway it’s easy on objects , difficult on wildlife that moves very fast and you are lucky when you get the right shot.
This is great. You have found the reason to push on - it is not easy. Different weeks, different challenges. Remember it is for your personal benefit. You are not trying to win a challenge or prove anything to anyone. This is for your own personal journey and to enjoy it.
You are doing great! Keep going.
I really like the contrast of the green and amber. Do you have one that is more square on to the wall taken at the height of the light? I think maybe a straight on angle would be a strong image
Thanks. Positive critique, encouragement, pointing out the underlying benefits of stretching – when responding to shared work it's IMO the right way.