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Doylem

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Dec 30, 2006
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Wherever I hang my hat...
Back in the Yorkshire Dales...

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kenoh

macrumors 604
Jul 18, 2008
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Glasgow, UK
Guys,

Please can you help me. I took this last night, looked amazing in the flesh but camera failed to capture what I saw. The clouds here are just too damn soft.

What could I have done to improve this?

Ken.


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by Ken OHagan, on Flickr
 
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Hughmac

macrumors 603
Feb 4, 2012
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Kent, UK
Guys,

Please can you help me. I took this last night, looked amazing in the flesh but camera failed to capture what I saw. The clouds here are just too damn soft.

What could I have done to improve this?

Ken.


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by Ken OHagan, on Flickr

Ken, you know I'm crap at PP, but I brought the shadows up and maybe improved it a bit?

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Cheers :)

Hugh
 
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Cheese&Apple

macrumors 68010
Jun 5, 2012
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6,606
Toronto
Guys,

Please can you help me. I took this last night, looked amazing in the flesh but camera failed to capture what I saw. The clouds here are just too damn soft.

What could I have done to improve this?

Ken.


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by Ken OHagan, on Flickr

Hi Ken,

I'm not sure about the clouds being soft (they look ok to me in this small image size) but for the next time...

Compose, expose and focus for the star of of your shot. In this case I'm thinking it's the moon and the sky. Looks to me like you've tried to capture too much. I wonder how the shot would have looked:

- in landscape orientation,
- with increased exposure in the sky to capture more of the cloud detail, and
- with just a small slice of the ground and the city lights (the group of lights in the distance only) to give the shot perspective and to anchor the composition.

IMO, the foreground city lights are too prominent and they detract from the moon and clouds.

~ Peter
 

kenoh

macrumors 604
Jul 18, 2008
6,507
10,850
Glasgow, UK
Hi Ken,

I'm not sure about the clouds being soft (they look ok to me in this small image size) but for the next time...

Compose, expose and focus for the star of of your shot. In this case I'm thinking it's the moon and the sky. Looks to me like you've tried to capture too much. I wonder how the shot would have looked:

- in landscape orientation,
- with increased exposure in the sky to capture more of the cloud detail, and
- with just a small slice of the ground and the city lights (the group of lights in the distance only) to give the shot perspective and to anchor the composition.

IMO, the foreground city lights are too prominent and they detract from the moon and clouds.

~ Peter


Thanks Peter, yes I was trying to get too much, the whole things was this beautiful eerie moon which was hanging over the houses below.

I have 15-20 more shots of it. Will look at what other options I have.

My concern was that I was at a decent iso (this one was at 100 others were faster), with a wide aperture and couldnt get the shutter speed up high enough to get the clouds nice and sharp.

Hmm, next time!
 
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