Insert the essential caveat: I am no expert by any means, so take my comments and thoughts with a grain of salt. I'm enjoying your POV here, it's perfect for getting out a heavy duty ND filter, somewhere between 10 - 16 stops depending on the available sunlight. The water in the fore is a bit distracting for my eyes, if you had taken basically the same POV, just higher, to avoid the fountain being in the frame, it brings the building back as the subject. In regards of PP, I would back off on the contrast or whatever brought out the haloing along the roof line.
Cheers Alexander, looking back on it, I'm inclined to agree with you on the contrast front. I must admit that I thought the fountain added something but a bit of PP to get rid of it gave the result below:
IMG_4669 by another scotsman, on Flickr
Thanks again for the feedback.
[Insert the caveat of me being an amateur here ] That's a great improvement to the overall composition! The only thing (in my eyes) that could lift it again, is to have more of the left side of the building visible, but beggars can't be choosers, especially if this was taken overseas whilst you were on a holiday. I won't comment on the PP to remove the fountain as I have no idea what programs or skill-set you have in that regard. Just as something to learn from, it's perfect, as it illustrates the changes more than well enough. There is still a bit of the halo along the roof line, which may be the result of using a simple plugin or app to make the selection of the sky for you. Nothing trumps Photoshop for the most control when making selections, but it is a bit of a steep learning curve when starting to use it. One final thought, I love that the building is left with a little convergence to the upright lines, it's much more natural in appearance than having everything perfectly square and looking like it will topple over on you.
You are more than welcome in regard of the feedback. I have received quite a few tips from the folks here and elsewhere on the web that gave me those 'aha' moments where my knowledge juggernauts ahead in some manner or another.
Looks like the one up front has taken a dip recently!
Great shots but cant you get in closer and more down to eye level with them? ;-)
Lol... And the water tightness of your shoes too no doubt!I would have liked to get closer, but they were out on the water and down from the boardwalk I was on. I used my 18-270 to get them. Limits of the glass :-(
The riverbank precinct in Adelaide, South Australia.
Cheers Alexander - I know it sounds trite but the participants in this site have been a great source of both learning and inspiration for me without any of the judgemental attitudes that pervade other sites.
Only processed from raw in Capture One - no selections but I think the halo is perhaps an artifact from applying a corner vignette that just happens to border on that top edge of the roof - I'll have a play. Needed something to make the sky a bit more dramatic. Unfortunately it was a one-day visit to DC....the Capitol building was draped in tarpaulins and surrounded by scaffolding. Typical.
Great lines and nice light. Good to see you back in this neck of the woods Alex.
Cheers,
Peter
In hindsight, I regret choosing this username as much as you probably think I do...
In hindsight, I regret choosing this username as much as you probably think I do...
an interesting way for you to declare your love to Grant, but each to his own. I hope you two will be very happy!