Thanks for taking the time to offer the C&C, Doylem, it is greatly appreciated. To be honest, I couldn't quite decide what I wanted to capture: the colours, the reflection or the mist in the background. If you don't mind me asking, how would you have framed the shot, and what would you have made the focus?
I visited the Air Force Armament Museum in Fort Walton Beach Friday after Thanksgiving. It isn't as big as the Naval Air Museum in Pensacola, but it has some great exhibits.
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The eye looks at a picture and tries to find some place to 'settle'. When we say a picture 'works', that may be because we give the eye a way to move through the picture, before coming to the picture's main subject. I don't know how I would have composed the shot any differently, as I don't know what's left or right of your pic.
But, for obvious reasons, I shoot bodies of water quite a lot, and try to include diagonal lines, and maybe vertical lines that break through the land and water areas... which can 'link' them. The subject may be something distinctive... or it may be something that stands out momentarily, due to being brightly lit, or in silhouette, etc. I'm not talking about 'rules of composition', because there aren't any... but just organising the picture area till it 'reads' well. Finding the subject is a kind of reward for the viewer... for making the effort to look at a photograph...
Moondancer in the mist...
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Thanks so much for the advice. It is much appreciated. To be perfectly honest, I was so overwhelmed with how amazing everything looked that day (and the entire honeymoon, for that matter!) I found myself pointing and shooting in a mad dash to capture everything. I really should have slowed down and looked at my surroundings compositionally. I am a little disappointed in myself for not doing that; it isn't everyday I can go and shoot in the Scottish countryside!
First time trying this new method of posting, hope it works:
Getting into the Christmas spirit
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In London for the day today on business. This tunnel was just before my office for the day.
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Blowing a gale, me bracing the camera to eliminate vibration, sand whipping across my face, 6 foot swell spraying over me and you can't see any of it with this 63 second exposure!
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Under The Weather by playswithlight, on Flickr
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I love, love, love this, but wonder how it would look in B&W. Do you have NIK Silver Efex or some other B&W plug-in? Hint, hint...![]()
Do you use Silver Efex Pro? I have a copy, but don't use it all that often.
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WOW!
That's better than the recent thing at Bondi, in my books.
An excellent capture, Reef.
Blowing a gale, me bracing the camera to eliminate vibration, sand whipping across my face, 6 foot swell spraying over me and you can't see any of it with this 63 second exposure!
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