It has my vote too.
I took the liberty to try Doylems suggestion. Ish if you mind, I will of course remove it.
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Don't know which one I like more.
Sorry, can you try a reload. I messed up my first upload
Another EDIT: I used Pixelmator. It has a quick&dirty removal tool.
This looks better to me. You could lose 20-25% from RHS. There's something about the girl running into the unknown... and the boy seemed to negate it...
I think they both make great shots. I agree with Doylem that the single child makes a more compelling image. The original is still a belter though.
Thank you Doylem. Can I ask your opinion: if I take out the boy on the right, there's a lot of empty space. At the moment, to me, the eye takes in the girl first as the more defined figure then travels in the direction she's looking and travelling and rests on the boy and they make a pair. It's always possible to convert to portrait or square format but that makes it a different photograph. Would you mind elaborating a bit more?
EDIT: missed your post oblomow!
Sorry I can't see the photo, I just get the blue question mark. When I try to follow the link I get a page that says IDJIT !!!
ANOTHER EDIT: I can see the photo now by clicking on Image in the link. ??? I'm very happy for you to leave it up, it'll be interesting to see what others think. Is it possible to do what you did in Photoshop CS4, which is what I have?
That's better, I can see it now, thanks oblomow! No, me neither. It's an interesting new perspective though.
I've not tried Pixelmator but it's not too expensive so I can see it in my future.Do you like it?
Thank you for the suggestion Doylem. I thought at first there'd be too much space but looking at oblomow's edit it looks fine.
It's funny how someone can look at one of your pictures with a fresh eye and see something different you've not noticed and suddenly it's completely different. Thanks for the comments!
The others had a bit more processing Ken. Mainly opening up the shadows and dropping the highlights. The blacksmith had the least amount of PP.
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Today's pic.
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I have to say while I like the original, the edited version does indeed have a stronger feel. I like the negative space to the right. Doylem, good shout.
Just rememeber it is easier to edit than to create in the first place. While the new version is awesome, it is still your image that you took, just with a different perspective on it. I agree with MacRy the original is a very nice shot and the new one is even better.
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Mate you are rocking that Fuji! I am going to go along to Summerlee here is Glasgow - if the weather gets better and I am looking to get the same effect you have on the anvil picture so thank you.
Are these with the Jupiter 8? It draws really nice!
I've not tried Pixelmator but it's not too expensive so I can see it in my future.Do you like it?
Yes and no. It is very powerful, but has a learning curve. I use it on the side to try things. It hasn't been integrated into my standard workflow.
Bought it on black friday. 14 euros. A real bargain. But it's definitely worth the price.
Mate you are rocking that Fuji! I am going to go along to Summerlee here is Glasgow - if the weather gets better and I am looking to get the same effect you have on the anvil picture so thank you.
Are these with the Jupiter 8? It draws really nice!
It was busy but hung around long enough for that moment much to the frustration of my wife given the temperature of -5C or so!
Here's another 20mm effort from in front of Grand Central. Comments always appreciated.
Love it... but the eye jumps from one child to the other. If you block out the boy on the right, the composition seems much stronger (IMO)...
It has my vote too.
I took the liberty to try Doylems suggestion. Ish if you mind, I will of course remove it.
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Don't know which one I like more.
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TreeLine by Hugh Russell, on Flickr
Cheers
Hugh
That's a better composition than the original Hugh.
Another from my recent sojourn. Comments always appreciated.
I like it. If the posts were to the left I'd think it would make for a stronger image.