Here is another one of my composite series.
Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed: 1/200 second
F Number: F/9.0
Focal Length: 17 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: May 20, 2008, 8:56:42 PM
[img]http://seenew.net/whereAreWeGoing9.jpg[/img]
Your concept of showing individuals reflecting on their own downfall has the potential to be poignant, but so far these photos don't quite make it for me. The main problem, as I see it, is that we don't get any clues to complete each narrative. A downfall becomes poignant when we recognize the "hamartia" or tragic flaw/error of the character--that is, what essentially caused the character's demise.
Also, in order for a viewer to connect with the characters, the characters need to be sympathetic or believable; otherwise, we're left asking "so what?". We need more information about the characters, their situations, and their personal reflections. For your project, I think you need actors more so than models. None of these models you have are very expressive or believable; they just look posed. (I'm not saying they need to be overtly emotional, but a good actor can give just the right hint of an internal conflict or mental process.)
The photos are technically very impressive, but the overall effect just falls flat for these reasons. Just my $0.02.