I am not suggesting the use of impact but the use of a bold condensed font family, i.e. Helvetica Neue Con Bld, Akzidenz Grotesk, etc. Mine was just a sample of something he could do, not exactly how he should do it. I was being constructive and giving him a helping hand is all.
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Here does this make it better?
Overall, this is a decent design, and certainly worlds better than the original logo, but here are some issues I have with it:
- It's impossible to tell what the name of the company is. Is it "JW", "Digital Archiving", or "JW Digital Archiving"? If it is "JW Digital Archiving", the full line should be the same font.
- If you are going to mix serifs and sans-serifs, I'd prefer the smaller character/longer phrase be sans-serif. Using serifs for the description line makes it look busier and harder to read than it has to be.
- The "Digital Archiving | gold standard" text needs to be aligned with the top and bottom edges of the large "W". Right now, it's too close in height to that character to
not be aligned with it, especially if it's part of the name of the company. Another idea, if possible, would be for the "Digital Archiving" line to match the height of the W and to align the bottom edge of "the gold standard" with the bottom edge of the J. The tail of the J may need to be extended to make this work.
- I don't know if all-caps is right for the description line.