As a relative newcomer to this photo stuff I really appreciate the feedback Doylem, especially from someone like yourself. As it happens, believe it or not, the focus on "nothingness" was a deliberate attempt to give (or capture) a sort of bleak, hopeless, post-industrial atmosphere to the scene. Not easy for me to describe succinctly but I imagined something like the vista a drunk with his face on the floor would see after a bottle of Buckie or other such beverage
. Whether or not I managed to get that over in the photo is another thing - it might appear as just a poorly-focussed shot but I'm happy to experiment and benefit from the style and quality of feedback that goes around in this forum. Keep it coming is all I can say - we all learn as a result.
I've attached a more conventional long exposure (30 sec) shot below. Thanks again (seriously).
Crosfield's transporter bridge by
another scotsman, on Flickr