You've done well. I like the inferred movement with the blur of the closer people and the plane of focus along that wall and the path.
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A great POV, Ken! Feel free to ignore my thought here, but I'd be tempted to remove the lighter stuff on the right of frame altogether, so there's just the centre and some very subtle light on the wall over to the right.
Just had a drool over the album you created with the images taken that night! It's a drop dead gorgeous subject, captured really well.