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The second shot is better by a large margin. Doylem touched on most of the salient differences, but I'll explain what I see, for what another opinion is worth.

In the second shot, the boat is better lit, is showing more of its sails, is sailing into the frame, is intersecting a leading line of light that helps to pick it out, and is closer to the viewer. The specular highlights along the hull are even making little twinkles, which is quite charming. And there is even a ray of sunlight beaming down right at the boat. That shot also allows the tall, distant tree to read well and to help balance the composition.

The first shot looks like a missed moment. The boat is smaller, darker, and is exiting the scene. And that foliage sticking up in the foreground is really distracting.

I could see some careful post work adding a little finesse to the second shot, but it's pretty well resolved in the ways that really matter.

Thanks Phrasikleia. When the other opinion is yours, it always counts. I guess my eye was drawn to the first sky too much instead of the focal point of the boat. Composition is probably the hardest thing to learn in photography. Still from what I was shooting/editing a few months ago I think I'm heading in the right direction. Still miles behind you and Doylem of course!
 
I'm only talking about lakes! I'm miles from decent sized water here.

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Mine for today. Not brilliant as my lens came up a little short for the subject (or should that be long?). Macro lens for Christmas!
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That's actually a pretty cool shot. The texture on the branch helps bigtime in making the ladybug contrast nicely.
Try a tighter crop in PP, since you're lacking the macro lens. For web-posting purposes, you should be able to winnow the frame down to 1:1 with a 1024 resolution without any problem.
 
That's actually a pretty cool shot. The texture on the branch helps bigtime in making the ladybug contrast nicely.
Try a tighter crop in PP, since you're lacking the macro lens. For web-posting purposes, you should be able to winnow the frame down to 1:1 with a 1024 resolution without any problem.

Just finished tweaking him for tomorrows POTD shot. Gone for a tight crop this time (different photo, same bug). Let me know what you think then.
 
Took this today with my Canon t1i and Canon 18-55mm lens.
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Kapalua Bay, Maui as the sun sets. Captured with a D800 and 24mm f\1.4 Nikkor lens.

There's something about this photo that keeps drawing me back for another look. I think it's the combination of the shallow depth of field and the gorgeous colours. It's almost abstract and epitomises feelings of enjoyment about warm summer holidays. :)
 
Fish River Canyon

Mine for today! Taken at the Fish River Canyon, Namibia. No tripod, 1/30, ƒ/4, ISO 320, 23 mm.

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Trail head

Bakeapples in St. Anthony, Newfoundland.

Apparently, red means unripe. They turn a solid orange when ready to pick. < snip >
Is it just the LCD screen unable to properly display reds, or is it my technique?


Baie qu'appelle? by FriskyFreeze, on Flickr

Having consumed and picked a number of litres of Bakeappeles during my time, your reds are spot on. Indeed, red means "green" in Newfoundland. Green in the sense of unripe. Same with Blueberries. If they're "green", they're not blue ! These berries also grow in Finland where they are known as "Cloud Berries". Ask your local liquor store if they carry "Cloudberry Liqueur" and get ready for a taste treat.


I'm really enjoying your Flamingo photos. Nice to see how the birds behave.

Nicely "seen" this photo. Especially like the berries leading the eye through.

The Viking Trail, Newfoundland's Great Northern Peninsula.


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The great Northern Pen and the Viking Trail ! The west coast of the island is so very different than anywhere else. The mountains in the distance form the start of the Appalachian chain. In this region, you have to keep your eyes peeled for Moose on the road. They are a poor form of speed bumps. For those interested in a great tune based on the viking trail, have a look at:

http://www.cbc.ca/player/RADIO+HOLDING+PEN/Radio+2+Videos/Song+Quest/ID/1669304689/

There have been some great contributions of late; Someoldguy... I always appreciate your photos. Mine for today... a photo along one of the trails in Killarney Provincial Park..

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I've gone back to revisit this photo, I first settled on it having a strong orange tint - but I think now it looks better with no toning at all, giving the photo more of a (spooky?) atmosphere. The foggy morning made this photo for me. I'm going to try and get up early this week to see if there's anything interesting to take photos of!

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At web-size, that is hardly noticeable. And short of a FF sensor, and a macro lens + good lighting (shooting at ISO 100), there's not much you can do about that.
 
I've gone back to revisit this photo, I first settled on it having a strong orange tint - but I think now it looks better with no toning at all, giving the photo more of a (spooky?) atmosphere. The foggy morning made this photo for me. I'm going to try and get up early this week to see if there's anything interesting to take photos of!

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Love it mate! Eerie tones!
 
So do I. It's still a bit too noisy for my liking.

For the OCD type, you could always create a new layer in Photoshop and clean up the background, masking off the foreground that you want to remain sharp.

Personally, if you're only sharing on the web, it doesn't need it. If it looks OK to you at 1024px wide, it's all good, as that's the size you are predominantly sharing at. Especially if this is a heavy crop.

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Something different today. Comments always welcome.


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That is fabulous!

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I'm really enjoying your Flamingo photos. Nice to see how the birds behave.

Thanks Barry. That's it for the Flamingoes from me this time, this was a trip for one of our 14 year old boys to get a chance to use his new mirrorless camera. I got him a secondhand Lumix that shoots RAW to have as his learner camera. I'm seriously impressed with it and he's finally given me a reason to learn Lightroom, why the heck I didn't shift to it earlier is a mystery to me now!

We are members at the zoo and we are going back every fortnight to focus on three animals each time, observing them and then trying to capture their personality and behaviour. All of my captures last Friday were to illustrate that to him. I'm on the right track if you were enjoying seeing their behaviour! :)

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I've gone back to revisit this photo, I first settled on it having a strong orange tint - but I think now it looks better with no toning at all, giving the photo more of a (spooky?) atmosphere. The foggy morning made this photo for me. I'm going to try and get up early this week to see if there's anything interesting to take photos of!

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This is great, the monotone treatment adds to the mystique of it.
 
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