Okay, here is another food picture... Hopefully some improvement, otherwise I am going to give up on food pictures for now. At least until I am able to get a book...
Pan seared rockfish, grilled portobello mushrooms, southwestern potato hash, grilled ramps and roasted tomato salsa.
Chef Jay
Right, im not gonna lie... it doesn't look too great! In a friendly, constructive way
So heres some pointers!
Firstly, look at other food photography. Look at the lighting, the framing, the depth of field, the colours... and compare it to yours. What do you see differently? To me it looks like a quick snapshot of some food shot on auto with the in camera flash. It doesn't make the food look very appetising, all of the reflections on the food. So...
Try to avoid using the on camera flash, maybe if you can, even use natrual daylight if you have no other flash options. Not the best, but better than that on camera flash! If you are using a flashgun, diffuse the light a little more by pointing it at the ceiling or using home made diffusers.
Stop down the aperture a little more! that little bit of depth of field on food photos always gets me, i think it looks really good
Also with this, try framing the food better from different angles... just experiment, really try to make the food look desirable. Because at the minute, it just doesn't if im honest... its mainly the flash reflection off the food! It just looks so unnatural and unappetizing.
Good luck to you, i hope i was of help and post some more results soon