Looking at the exif info for this shot (17mm, f5.6, 1/6s, ISO1600) the first suggestion would be to shoot at a much lower ISO than 1600. I'd use ISO 200 (which I think is the native base iso for this sensor), a tripod and adjust the shutter speed accordingly. If this is a location you can't go back to (seeing how the date the photo was taken is 10-03-2008), then look into the software noise reduction solutions like Noise Ninja.
This is a bit washed out in the highlights, but it reminds me of the type of work I shot in college using a 4x5 view camera. Why don't you go back to this scene and see if you can improve on the exposure and capture more of the highlights without loosing all of the shadows?
Dale
mcavjame, is this an hdr or tonemapped image? still not sure what the difference between the two is.
Thanks, Doylem, I always appreciate your comments. I understand what you are saying. As I cycle around looking for good light, subject and light do not always occur in the same place. I loved the way this field was lit up with the almost uniform grey in the background. I like to post as often as I can, even if I don't have a great shot to share.^^^
A couple of things are spoiling my enjoyment of your pix...
The horizontal format, in particular, makes the viewer scan the pic from left to right (or for some folk, right to left...), looking for the subject. Like the barn in the shot you posted yesterday. If the subject isn't immediately apparent, the eye keeps looking for it... with no place to 'rest'.
The other thing is the bits of fence-post, foliage, hedgerows in the foreground, which are distracting. Maybe take a bit more time to shoot, like walking into a field rather than shooting over a hedge.
Just my two-pennorth...
The idea is great, but the tire tracks ruin the symmetry for me, and the puddle at the back ruins the simplicity. I'd clone them out, and probably shift the yellow color of the concrete to blue a bit to match with the clothing, maybe with a contrast boost to go with the blacks too.
As I cycle around looking for good light, subject and light do not always occur in the same place.
I'll definitely keep that in mind. I can see what you're saying with the color. Thanks
Want to see a quick edit? Not the fine selection you'd need for usage, but just how I'd generally do it?
Yeah that'd be great!
Yes, interesting edits, mcavjame. I think you've put your finger on the main problem: the band members need to be more cohesive. They're a bit too spread out, and there is too much dead space around them, so they don't have quite enough "presence" in the frame. The latter problem could be helped by cropping, but the band members still need to be "tighter," and yes, that drummer's gaze out of the frame is distracting.
That said, I think the original photo has a lot going for it. I especially like the lighting (nice, diffused light) and the loose V-formation. So I wouldn't just move the drummer in post because doing so breaks the "V".
Description from my flickr:
I took this photo for my Dad to enter in a Cartier employee competition. He has already made it to the semi-finals (all of the challenges up to now were written tests), and the challenge for the semi-finals was to do your best to depict "Cartier: I love you too" via a photo. This is what we came up with!
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It's interesting how everyone throws out their personal preferences, so I might as well toss mine in.
Incredible lighting. Very beautiful shot.