This is my first picture ... What do you think ? (First time using photoshop too)
http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i1772907_ThaliaBW4upload.jpg
I need your feedback.
EDIT : my picture is too big for the forum ... here is the link.
I love the abstract, very nice curves, and deep blues. What is the subject in the photo?
Is this better?
Better, yes: fewer extraneous details. But there's no feeling that a race is about to begin (the 'coiled spring' before the explosive start); he could be kneeling down to have a rest. Half a second later he would be up on his blocks: ready. Imagine taking a shot at that moment, with you lying on the track-side. You'd be able to see the expression on his face, and maybe get a more dynamic shot....
Is this better?
Really impressed with the color and definition in that whole scene... you should photograph more animals! Cute puppy. Yours?First attempt at shooting animals, critique?